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Raw
You cut me open,
You...make me bleed...
All my wounds are open,
Raw and seeping...
Your devilish desires!
Set me on fire!
But now I seem to be!
The one thing you don't require!
I am raw!
And I am torn
Everything about me,
Has been worn...
Away!
From you!
You stand there,
And smile at me,
And every little smile,
Makes me bleed!
A little more...
I don't know what I saw,
In you!
The one who has made me raw...
(You seep from my wounds,
As I walk away...)
I have become addicted,
To the pain that is you...
And even though I need you to be gone,
It scares me to lose...
Your evil eyes!
Cut me like knives!
Slowly taking away!
All of my life!
I am raw!
And I am torn
Everything about me,
Has been worn...
Away!
From you!
You stand there,
And smile at me,
And every little smile,
Makes me bleed!
A little more...
I don't know what I saw,
In you!
The one who has made me raw...
(You seep from my wounds,
As I walk away...)
I am walking away...
For once!
For a change...!
With every step that I take...
I finally!
Feel safe!
Safe from you...!
Now, I am raw!
And I am torn
Everything about me,
Has been worn...
Away!
From you!
You stand there,
And smile at me,
And every little smile,
Makes me bleed!
A little more...
I don't know what I saw,
In you!
The one who has made me raw...
(You seep from my wounds,
As I walk away...)
jlp April 28, 2009
You cut me open,
You...make me bleed...
All my wounds are open,
Raw and seeping...
Your devilish desires!
Set me on fire!
But now I seem to be!
The one thing you don't require!
I am raw!
And I am torn
Everything about me,
Has been worn...
Away!
From you!
You stand there,
And smile at me,
And every little smile,
Makes me bleed!
A little more...
I don't know what I saw,
In you!
The one who has made me raw...
(You seep from my wounds,
As I walk away...)
I have become addicted,
To the pain that is you...
And even though I need you to be gone,
It scares me to lose...
Your evil eyes!
Cut me like knives!
Slowly taking away!
All of my life!
I am raw!
And I am torn
Everything about me,
Has been worn...
Away!
From you!
You stand there,
And smile at me,
And every little smile,
Makes me bleed!
A little more...
I don't know what I saw,
In you!
The one who has made me raw...
(You seep from my wounds,
As I walk away...)
I am walking away...
For once!
For a change...!
With every step that I take...
I finally!
Feel safe!
Safe from you...!
Now, I am raw!
And I am torn
Everything about me,
Has been worn...
Away!
From you!
You stand there,
And smile at me,
And every little smile,
Makes me bleed!
A little more...
I don't know what I saw,
In you!
The one who has made me raw...
(You seep from my wounds,
As I walk away...)
jlp April 28, 2009
Literature
raw
take back
your pretty love
words
tuck them
under your
tongue
kiss me
until my lips bloom
with bruises
scrape me raw
with your
blistering skin
and scratch
this itch until
it bleeds
Literature
love
my joy in you
was short lived
my sorrow
everlasting
Literature
i'm sorry.
i'm sorry for subjecting you to my nonsense,
for making you deal with my crappy poems,
for imposing upon you my personal circle of hell.
i'm sorry for my silver silences,
for all the times i couldn't say a word,
for the walls i built around myself in hopes
that behind them, i'll disappear unnoticed.
i'm sorry for letting myself stray beyond your reach,
for getting lost in the shadows and the lies.
i'm sorry for destroying myself without a thought
as to the possibility i was hurting you too
and i'm sorry that i don't know how to make it all better.
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For a time after heartbreak, the wounds are open, wide, they are raw.
Picking at the wounds only makes them worse. Walk away. Let them heal.
Picking at the wounds only makes them worse. Walk away. Let them heal.
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you had me at seeping