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Sparkling, enticing
What I see,
Sucks the breath out of me
Mesmerizing, vivacious,
So hypnotizing,
So very contagious
So alive...
It explodes from inside!
You glow...
You shine...!
You light up my life!
You take away my pain
So effervescent tonight!
And I fall into your eyes again
Every vision of you, a delight!
Every time it feels the same...
Beautiful, so radiant
What I see,
Just fills me up...
With this love,
I can't describe!
But every day you know I'll try...!
So...alive!
Everything you are,
Explodes from inside!
You glow...!
You shine!
You light up my life!
You take away my pain
So effervescent tonight!
And I fall into your eyes again
Every vision of you, a delight!
Every time it feels the same...
I see the look,
It's in your eyes
And that look,
Is mine all mine
It's a moment frozen in time!(Time!)(Time!)
(You...glow...)
My god, baby...you shine!
(So...alive...)
Everything you are...! Explodes from inside!
You light up my life!
You take away my pain!
So effervescent tonight!
And I fall into your eyes again!
Every vision of you, a delight!
Every time it feels the same!
So effervescent tonight!
You burn my soul just like flame!
So effervescent tonight!
I fall into your eyes again...
You are so,
Effervescent,
And one million lifetimes with you...
Would never be enough...
jlp August 25, 2010
What I see,
Sucks the breath out of me
Mesmerizing, vivacious,
So hypnotizing,
So very contagious
So alive...
It explodes from inside!
You glow...
You shine...!
You light up my life!
You take away my pain
So effervescent tonight!
And I fall into your eyes again
Every vision of you, a delight!
Every time it feels the same...
Beautiful, so radiant
What I see,
Just fills me up...
With this love,
I can't describe!
But every day you know I'll try...!
So...alive!
Everything you are,
Explodes from inside!
You glow...!
You shine!
You light up my life!
You take away my pain
So effervescent tonight!
And I fall into your eyes again
Every vision of you, a delight!
Every time it feels the same...
I see the look,
It's in your eyes
And that look,
Is mine all mine
It's a moment frozen in time!(Time!)(Time!)
(You...glow...)
My god, baby...you shine!
(So...alive...)
Everything you are...! Explodes from inside!
You light up my life!
You take away my pain!
So effervescent tonight!
And I fall into your eyes again!
Every vision of you, a delight!
Every time it feels the same!
So effervescent tonight!
You burn my soul just like flame!
So effervescent tonight!
I fall into your eyes again...
You are so,
Effervescent,
And one million lifetimes with you...
Would never be enough...
jlp August 25, 2010
Literature
His Butterfly
He called me his butterfly
And I had to ask him why.
He told me
From the moment we first spoke
He could tell
My heart had been broke.
He said the bitterness
I wrapped myself in
Was like the cocoon
the caterpillar would spin.
As we talked
and I opened my heart
He said this tender feeling
Was just the start.
I doubt he will ever know
How his butterfly will grow.
Literature
Responding
Your elusive smile made me wonder,
If you believe I missed you at all.
It's like the inches between us,
Just a little too far for you to feel the aching of my heart.
But the kiss that swept me unprepared,
Made me realize just how much you miss me,
How much your smile hid,
And how my love will always respond to you in return.
Literature
lashless.
~
I was a broken screen, cracking
not-so-gracefully under pressure and leaking
my emotions all over
my see-through façade.
You were a lightning-struck lake, all too eager
to hurt and drown out my insatiable
curiosity.
I was the cyanide in your coffee
and you were the mercury in my veins,
(though I was the bitter insomniac
and you the more toxic, inflexible one.)
You told me I was spin
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Still makes me melt and get all happy.