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It begins,
With a sense of unease
Things,
Are not quite,
Right
Not like they should be
Blind panic is swelling,
And my soul is telling,
Me,
To run,
AWAY
I begin shaking,
I feel the fear breaking
Through,
Me
Shifting eyes,
Undisguised,
Unable to hide,
The pain
Senses spinning,
I am hearing,
Things that aren't,
There
And I,
Am,
SCARED
Of you,
Of me,
Of them,
Of this,
Unreal reality,
That feels like,
Seems like,
Must be,
A bad dream
A nightmare
Sweat is pouring,
Nails are scoring,
Harsh lines in the table,
In front of me
Knees are bracing,
My lips are tasting,
FEAR
jlp May 13, 2009
With a sense of unease
Things,
Are not quite,
Right
Not like they should be
Blind panic is swelling,
And my soul is telling,
Me,
To run,
AWAY
I begin shaking,
I feel the fear breaking
Through,
Me
Shifting eyes,
Undisguised,
Unable to hide,
The pain
Senses spinning,
I am hearing,
Things that aren't,
There
And I,
Am,
SCARED
Of you,
Of me,
Of them,
Of this,
Unreal reality,
That feels like,
Seems like,
Must be,
A bad dream
A nightmare
Sweat is pouring,
Nails are scoring,
Harsh lines in the table,
In front of me
Knees are bracing,
My lips are tasting,
FEAR
jlp May 13, 2009
Literature
Orphan
Sunlight trickles in,
prying her eyelids open.
"It's morning, Lilly."
"Wake up, you worthless child,"
cries the sun.
"Wake up, Sweetie,"
her mother utters softly.
"Wake up and see
how beautiful the world is."
Once upon a time, perhaps,
but not anymore.
Once upon a time,
a lot of things.
Like once upon a time,
she had a warm bed,
and her mother
came in every morning
to tell her
it was time,
time to open up
her lovely chocolate eyes
and show the world
her brightest smile.
"Look, Lilly,"
she would say
as she pulled the curtains
gently aside.
"Look at the sun;
isn't she gorgeous?"
"Yes, Mommy,"
she'd whisper, gri
Literature
Manic
She breathes in…She breathes out
Quick and shallow…breathing heavily…remind me how to breathe properly before I'm gone…
She wakes up and lays down
The sun is shining and the sky is blue…Still, I can't bring myself to move…Just let me rest in pieces…
She can hardly speak and so she screams
No one is listening…No one can hear me unless I yell to them…A whisper to a scream…
You should not give again because I take so often
You give me nothing but love…I selfishly continue to take…
Nothing you say will wash it away You're standing in the pouring rain
I say it won't happen again
Literature
Panic Attack
It's not like crying,
Where the pain inside is released with the tears you shed
And when you're finished you can curl up with the quiet and sleep.
It's not like sadness,
When the feeling is definite,
And you know it's not all in your head.
With this,
It claws at your chest,
Constricting your heart and your muscles lock up.
I wonder if I'll disappear.
It doesn't go away,
But lurks deep inside,
And you wonder if you're simply crazy.
Your thoughts swim as you're gasping for breath,
And even though you know it's coming,
You're still afraid.
And when it's all over,
You're still at the breaking point of emotion.
I wond
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The theme is "anxiety", suggested by ~becbecmuffin
It was quite interesting to describe.
It's not a funny thing though, i know many who suffer from "panic attacks". What they are is actually quite simple, but hard to avoid. They are your body reacting to fear and nervousness, causing your blood pressure to spike sharply, sending a surge of adrenaline into your blood.
Sounds so clean in words, right?
It's not that way in real life at all.
The reality is that EVERYONE will at some point in their life suffer a panic attack.
So rather than point and laugh and make it worse, understand and help a person who is having one.
The pointing and laughing might literally kill them.
I hope you like it Niffum. 
It was quite interesting to describe.
It's not a funny thing though, i know many who suffer from "panic attacks". What they are is actually quite simple, but hard to avoid. They are your body reacting to fear and nervousness, causing your blood pressure to spike sharply, sending a surge of adrenaline into your blood.
Sounds so clean in words, right?
It's not that way in real life at all.
The reality is that EVERYONE will at some point in their life suffer a panic attack.
So rather than point and laugh and make it worse, understand and help a person who is having one.
The pointing and laughing might literally kill them.
I hope you like it Niffum.
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this is very well written. and you've described it very well~
from your artist comments it almost sounds as if you've never had a panic attack yourself. if that's the case, then i'm even more amazed at how well you've described it. XP
i have an anxiety dissorder and get panic attacks about once every two months or so. it used to be alot worse but i've started taking medicine for it and now it's a whole lot better. ^_^
i think it's awesome that you're trying to raise awareness about panic attacks~
from your artist comments it almost sounds as if you've never had a panic attack yourself. if that's the case, then i'm even more amazed at how well you've described it. XP
i have an anxiety dissorder and get panic attacks about once every two months or so. it used to be alot worse but i've started taking medicine for it and now it's a whole lot better. ^_^
i think it's awesome that you're trying to raise awareness about panic attacks~